Minggu, 27 November 2011

(story) AMAYADORI

sebenarnya ini adalah fanfiction yang saya buat setengah tahun yang lalu
tapi... saya berpikir bahwa ini bisa saja merupakan original fiction dikarenakan deskripsi yang tidak terlalu menjelaskan identitas tokoh-tokohnya ="))

dan... intinya, saya hanya ingin berbagi saja karena ini merupakan karya yang sangat berkesan bagi saya <-- narsis #whacked ="DDDDD

...silahkan...


Amayadori

Sounds of raindrops clashing the umbrella I hold ring loudly into my ears as if wanted to completely make me deaf of any other sounds; even his breathes and my heart beats. I watch my slow hesitant steps and his steady ones and feel nothing but the cold water splashing, dripping my shoes wet and freezing my feet. The reflection of me and him and our umbrellas on the pounds blur into abstract colors. I stare at it with blank eyes—

He halts. I stop. I tilt my head at his direction and find a gentle little smile and slight cloudy eyes. There is somewhat a glint of a flash flooding emotion in his eyes but no voice is slipped through the thin lips that still curve unwaveringly in a smile. I nod slightly, averting away my gaze as I know what he means in the noisy silence.

We turn, heading towards the nearest shelter of a closed convenient store, folding our umbrellas and leaning them against the wall.

The sounds of rain ring louder into my ears, trying their best to make me deaf of any other sound; his breathes and my heart beats. As I look at the ‘world’ before me, it’s blurring into pale abstract colors mixing with grayish shades because of the rain. Not only sounds, it looks like the rain also wants to manipulate my eyes to only see what it wants to show; a ‘world’ with hazy sceneries and big dots of hydrangeas that are gradually losing their bold colorful colors.

My sense is alarmed to the gentle touch on my shoulder. I turn and, again, meet with his gentle smile. He’s trying to dry me with a handkerchief, sweeping the drops the rain leaves unintentionally. Merely remaining quiet, I watch as he pulls my frozen hand and gently dry it. And as he let my hand go only to pull my other hand, I find myself lifting the already cleaned hand to touch his bangs and sweeping several drops off.

His eyes widened a little for a while; an obvious emotion that even I can read: shocked. But soon they soften into a usual gaze, slowly looking down, focusing on sweeping my other hand. I let him not to mutter anything because it’ll be in vain because I barely can hear any sounds right now. The sounds of rain have made me deaf of any other sounds; his breathes and my heart beats. It’s so noisy yet voiceless. And it’s calming yet…

I move my fingers, tracing his face (cheek, chin, and slowly up on to the thin lips, staying still). I can feel he let go of my hand as he has finished cleaning it, but I don’t withdraw my other one from his face, from his lips. Stay still.

He doesn’t give any hints of protest or any meaningful responses as the lips don’t move and the slowly-watery eyes are still clouded a little with a flooding emotion that flashes in beautifully. I stare straightly at those ‘mirrors’ and find my reflection looks so small. There’s a little painful squeeze in what I recall as my heart. Finally, I withdraw my hand, letting it fall loosely.

And yet, he doesn’t give any.

I bow my head, focusing on the wet ground, to the pound created from the drops splashing from outside the shelter and the drops from my lower clothes.  And I spot a similar yet different pound too below his figure. Umbrellas really don’t shelter us from the rain completely. And I begin to feel that the rain really wants to manipulate everything, drowning them into a hazy world of it. As I wonder like that, the little painful squeeze comes back, tugging my what-so-called heart. I place my trembling hand on chest as if to cease such strange sensation away. But I fail.

His hand gently touches mine on chest. His finger intertwines with mine, pulling it together down. He keeps it like that without even any other movements; hints to what he has done, a mere response. I stare at the intertwining fingers. And whether it’s because of the rain or it’s indeed because of the rain, my sight goes blur. My eyes are hot and burning. The painful squeeze in my heart becomes severe yet I feel strangely relieved because at the same time it seems like melting away into the hazy world of the rain. And before I can stop myself, my tears find their way down onto my numb cheeks.

It’s all the rain’s fault. Its sounds. Its transparent barrier. Its hazy world. All just manipulate me, manipulate us. But why, even like that, it feels so much real?

The finger tugs mine a little. My lips broaden into a little smile.

Maybe it’s because of the rain that even the tiniest the most infinitesimal warmth is so overwhelming than ever. And at that thought, I give up on blaming the rain.

Then as I realize, my ears miss the thick loud sounds and the grayish shades deceased into bright light of evening sun. I look up, turning my head towards the view before me; it’s much clearer and the hydrangeas’ colorful colors are even bolder that it’s so beautiful. It’s so beautiful that it’s relieving.

“...let's go home?”

His voice rings so loud into my ears, into my hearts, into me. It vibrates a nostalgic feeling. And I’m just reminded of how much I miss his voice, how much I miss him.

I nod slowly.

It’s all the rain’s fault.

And it doesn’t matter.

4 February 2011
By Natsu^^v

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